Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My birthplace is Gwangju, Korea. Gwangju is a safe place with little damage from natural disasters. When many areas in Korea suffered a lot of damage from typhoons, Gwangju passed with little damage compared to other places, making me feel grateful every time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Eliana!
Thank you for answering your homework and sharing things about your birthplace.
May you have a wonderful experience this weekend and I hope you\'ll discover more great things about Gwangju!
Aki~
My birthplace is Gwangju, Korea. Gwangju is a safe place with little damage from natural disasters.
>> CORRECT!
When many areas in Korea suffered a lot of damage from typhoons, Gwangju passed with little damage compared to other places, making me feel grateful every time.
>> CORRECT!
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