Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, T. Donna.
How was your day?
Actually, after our morning class, I took a nap for about 30 minutes.
That\'s because I didn\'t have to take my kids to the school this morning.
There has been an important issue about elementary school teacher these days.
A crazy parent threatened their kid\'s teacher about false things and in conclusion the teacher suicided.
Lately, all respect have disappeared in our country.
Students look down on their teacher, children don\'t listen to their parents, and patients don\'t agree with doctors\' opinion about diseases.
I think there are too many wrong information and education in Korea nowadays.
Anyway, today most teachers decided to cherish a dead teacher with a way not to work together.
Hence, my kids spent most of their time at home today.
Regarding my homework, I really want to go to any concert.
I don\'t care if it will be IU\'s or other\'s.
Thanks for your lovely story.
If possible, I hope I could listen to your song someday.
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Dr. [이름]!
I hustled yesterday with my laundry with a merciful hour of sunshine. Today, the sun shone for only five minutes, I feel like a wilting flower inside the house.
It\'s good that you got to rest for some more after our class. Teachers meanwhile want to assert their rights these days. We cannot blame them. As you mentioned, there is anarchy in things when it comes to power. We need to aim for some equilibrium between teacher and students plus the parents rights. We can only hope that their welfare will be better after the protest.
Misinformation as well as entitlement are severe nowadays. We can watch videos of people complaining just about anything without ample consideration about the people around them. During these times, I wish for Communism. I kid. ^^
Regarding my song, I guess this is not possible. ^^ Well, show me your guitar skills first.
Congratulations for achieving a very high level of correctness in your grammar here on your homework! As evident below, you only had one suggestion. Your work was flawless like a perfect facial treatment! Carry on!
Catch you later in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
How was your day?
>> Correct!
Actually, after our morning class, I took a nap for about 30 minutes.
>> Correct!
That\'s because I didn\'t have to take my kids to the school this morning.
>> Correct!
There has been an important issue about elementary school teacher these days.
>> Correct!
Or: There has been an important issue about elementary school teachers these days.
Or: There has been an important issue about elementary school teachers these days.
A crazy parent threatened their kid\'s teacher about false things and in conclusion the teacher suicided.
>> Correct!
Lately, all respect have disappeared in our country.
>> Correct!
Students look down on their teacher, children don\'t listen to their parents, and patients don\'t agree with doctors\' opinion about diseases.
>> Correct!
I think there are too many wrong information and education in Korea nowadays.
I think there are too many wrong information and education in Korea nowadays.
>> Correct!
Anyway, today most teachers decided to cherish a dead teacher with a way not to work together.
>> Correct!
Hence, my kids spent most of their time at home today.
>> Correct!
Regarding my homework, I really want to go to any concert.
>> Correct!
I don\'t care if it will be IU\'s or other\'s.
>> Correct!
Thanks for your lovely story.
Thanks for your lovely story.
>> Correct!
If possible, I hope I could listen to your song someday.
If possible, I hope I could listen to your song someday.
>> Correct!
See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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