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I don’t exercise using balls and rackets.
Because I can’t catch the ball where is comming to the left side.
But I can bike a little and swimming.
They took more time than other people to learn bike.
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Great day, Ms. [이름]ny!
Once again, let me commend you for the effort in writing your thoughts.
Enjoy learning English.
Aki~
I don’t exercise using balls and rackets.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I can’t catch the ball where is comming to the left side.
>>> Because I can’t catch the ball when it is coming from the left side.
But I can bike a little and swimming.
>>> But I can ride a bike and swim.
They took more time than other people to learn bike.
>>> Learning them took me more time than other people.
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