Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change my middle school days.
The most timid and quiet time of my life was middle school.
Maybe that\'s why I have very few memories from middle school.
My middle school friend enjoyed English class more than anything else.
I am the type of person who studies only when there is necessity and purpose, so it was an unpleasant time for me because I did not feel the need for English at all.
My friend and I took English classes with the same English teacher, but our reactions were very different.
I wish I could have solidified the basics of English during the three years of middle school if I had been curiously watching my friend\'s fun and being stimulated, so I want to change those days.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Eliana!
Thank you for this. I guess all people are like that, we tend to regret things when it is already over and we wish we could go back and fix them. I hope that you will not live a life full of regrets because it stops you from moving forward. Now that you are studying English, give your best shot and try to widen your vocabulary so you will not have a hard time making sentences.
see you!
Aki~
I want to change my middle school days.
>>> CORRECT!
The most timid and quiet time of my life was middle school.
>>> CORRECT!
Maybe that\'s why I have very few memories from middle school.
>>> CORRECT!
My middle school friend enjoyed English class more than anything else.
>>> CORRECT!
I am the type of person who studies only when there is necessity and purpose, so it was an unpleasant time for me because I did not feel the need for English at all.
>>> I am the type of person who studies only when there is a necessity and purpose, so it was an unpleasant time for me because I did not feel the need for English at all.
My friend and I took English classes with the same English teacher, but our reactions were very different.
>>> CORRECT!
I wish I could have solidified the basics of English during the three years of middle school if I had been curiously watching my friend\'s fun and being stimulated, so I want to change those days.
>>> CORRECT!
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