Homework
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Q: What are the things that you can learn when you travel to another place?
A: The things that I can learn by traveling to another place is their culture, or I can have a new experience.
I think knowing another country\'s culture is important, and I think one of the most important thing in life is experiences.
So I think traveling is a good activity for the life.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. The things that I can learn by traveling to another place is their culture, or I can have a new experience.
>>The things that I can learn by traveling to another place is their culture, or a new experience.
2. I think knowing another country\'s culture is important, and I think one of the most important thing in life is experiences.
>>I think knowing another country\'s culture is important, and I think one of the most important things in life is experiences.
3. So I think traveling is a good activity for the life.
>>So I think traveling is a good activity for one\'s life.
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