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What are your unhealthy habits? How will you overcome them?
I think my unhealthy habit is eating small .
It bad habit, I do exercise 4 times a week but I can not get muscle.
My personal trainer talk to me you have to eat food more than now.
so recently I effort eat food a lot
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Wow! You did a good job by answering this homework, [이름]! May you always have eagerness to maintain your healthy body.-Faith-
What are your unhealthy habits? How will you overcome them?>> CORRECT
I think my unhealthy habit is eating small .
I think my unhealthy habit is eating small .
>> I think my unhealthy habit is eating small meals.
It bad habit, I do exercise 4 times a week but I can not get muscle.
It bad habit, I do exercise 4 times a week but I can not get muscle.
>> It is a bad habit because I do exercise four times a week but I cannot build muscles.
My personal trainer talk to me you have to eat food more than now.
My personal trainer talk to me you have to eat food more than now.
>> My personal trainer talked to me and said that I had to eat more foods than now.
so recently I effort eat food a lot
so recently I effort eat food a lot
>> Therefore, recently, I make an effort to eat a lot of food.
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