homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 09/05
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Do you think the quality of our sleep affects our life everyday? Why do you think so?
Yes I think sleeping is very impotant to our life because our body is healed during we sleep and if we don\'t have sleep maked a lot of trouble
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Yes I think sleeping is very impotant to our life because our body is healed during we sleep and if we don\'t have sleep maked a lot of trouble
>> Yes, I think sleeping is very important in our lives because our body is being healed.
Yes I think sleeping is very impotant to our life because our body is healed during we sleep and if we don\'t have sleep maked a lot of trouble
>> Yes, I think sleeping is very important in our lives because our body is being healed.
>> If we don\'t sleep, it will give us a lot of trouble.
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