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The people I always check on are my family. More than anything else, I always check my family\'s health and my daughters\' skin. Because they are girls, their skin is sensitive. And we look at their daily lives and moods.
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Good afternoon, Eliana!
Most women check on their family a lot, especially if you became a wife and a mother. Thanks for this!
Aki~
The people I always check on are my family.
>>> CORRECT!
More than anything else, I always check my family\'s health and my daughters\' skin.
>>> CORRECT!
Because they are girls, their skin is sensitive.
>>> CORRECT!
And we look at their daily lives and moods.
>>> CORRECT!
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