Homework

2023-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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HOMEWORK: If given the chance, what country do you want live in and why? ---------------- I want to live in Guam. Because i traveled to Guam 5 years ago. I saw beautiful ocean view and took a rest. I felt peaceful. Seafood of Guam was delicious. I want to go back that moment.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Melody!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I want to live in Guam. Because i traveled to Guam 5 years ago.

>>I want to live in Guam because I traveled to Guam 5 years ago.

2. I saw beautiful ocean view and took a rest.

>>I saw the beautiful ocean view and took a rest.

3. I felt peaceful.

>>CORRECT!

4. Seafood of Guam was delicious. I want to go back that moment.

>>The seafood in Guam was also delicious so I want to go back to that moment.

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