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I think learning English is necessary for young people to join a company.
Most of company require the English grade.
And If they possible , They had better learn another language related job that they want to do.
Ability of speaking two language can help you to choose a variety of jobs.
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Hi there Ms. [이름]ny!
This is what I have been thinking, since English was taught in school in elementary, why not incorporate speaking and listening so that at a young age, children will learn the four cores of English ( listening, writing, speaking, and reading skills. These language skills are conversation abilities that allow you to express yourself clearly and precisely. I hope this will be considered.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I think learning English is necessary for young people to join a company.
>>> CORRECT!
Most of company require the English grade.
>>> Most of the company require the English grade.
And If they possible , They had better learn another language related job that they want to do.
>> And If possible, they had better learn another language-related job that they want to do.
Ability of speaking two language can help you to choose a variety of jobs.
>> Ability to speak two languages can help you to choose a variety of jobs.
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