Homework
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Q: Why do you think most fairy tales have happy endings?
A: I think it\'s because usually fairy tales are for kids.
If kids read a story about bad or sad endings, they can have a worse thoughts about world or books.
And if kids read a story about happy ending, they will have a good thoughts.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think it\'s because usually fairy tales are for kids.
>>I think it\'s because fairy tales are usually for kids.
2. If kids read a story about bad or sad endings, they can have a worse thoughts about world or books.
>>If kids read a story with bad or sad endings, they can have negative thoughts about the world or the books.
3. And if kids read a story about happy ending, they will have a good thoughts.
>>If kids read a story with happy endings, they will have positive thoughts.
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