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How would you convince someone to travel?
I tell to him. what is the advantages of traveling
there are a lot of benefit
first, You can get experience whether it is good or bad. I think it will help you.
next, You make friend each contries
finally, You can eat the traditional food of the travel destination. It will make you happy.
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You wrote your ideas clearly, [이름]! Good job! Your answers are persuasive because they are all realistic. See you!-Faith-
How would you convince someone to travel?>> CORRECT
I tell to him. what is the advantages of traveling
>> I will tell him the advantages of traveling.
there are a lot of benefit
>> In fact, there are lots of benefits.
first, You can get experience whether it is good or bad. I think it will help you.
first, You can get experience whether it is good or bad. I think it will help you.
>> First, you can get experiences whether it is good or bad and I think it will help you.
OR First, you can get good or bad experiences, and they will be helpful to you.
next, You make friend each contries
next, You make friend each contries
>> Next, you can make friends in each country you visit.
finally, You can eat the traditional food of the travel destination. It will make you happy.
finally, You can eat the traditional food of the travel destination. It will make you happy.
>> Finally, you can eat the traditional food of your travel destination, and it will make you happy.
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