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Q: What can you do to help your parents when they\'re having a hard time with their jobs?
A: I think I can encourage them by telling them the advantage or the things that I felt thankful to them by their jobs.
If they know that I\'ve been happy by their jobs for a lot of times, they can have motivations from them, and they can be happy.
I think I can motivate them by other things, too.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If they know that I\'ve been happy by their jobs for a lot of times, they can have motivations from them, and they can be happy.
3. I think I can motivate them by other things, too.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think I can encourage them by telling them the advantage or the things that I felt thankful to them by their jobs.
>>I think I can encourage them by telling the things that I feel thankful for because of their jobs.
2. If they know that I\'ve been happy by their jobs for a lot of times, they can have motivations from them, and they can be happy.
>>Once they know how happy their jobs make me, they may be motivated and happy.
3. I think I can motivate them by other things, too.
>>I think I can also motivate them by other things, too.
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