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Would you like to take a cruise? Where to? With whom?
Yes If I get a chance that take cruise.
I want to take cruise with my family.
I didn\'t have time with my family so we go to Europe on a cruise and I will take time with them
강사 첨삭
This is a lovely plan, [이름]! It is always wonderful to spend our time with our loving family.-Faith-
Would you like to take a cruise? Where to? With whom?>> CORRECT
Yes If I get a chance that take cruise.
Yes If I get a chance that take cruise.
>> If I got a chance, I would take a cruise.
I want to take cruise with my family. I didn\'t have time with my family so we go to Europe on a cruise and I will take time with them
>> I want to take a cruise with my family because I didn\'t have time with them, so I would like to go to Europe on a cruise, and I would take my time with them.
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