homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 09/08
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think is the most effective way to stop or break a vice? Why do you think so?
I think if someone want to change himself from vice He have to realize himself because evene if another people advice to him he never change it if he doesnt realize
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I think if someone want to change himself from vice He have to realize himself because evene if another people advice to him he never change it if he doesnt realize
>> I think if someone wants to change themselves from their vice, they have to realize it by themselves.
>> Even if other people give them advice, they will never change unless they realize it.
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