Homework
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Q: What are the things to consider when moving in to a new house?
A: I think it\'s the money and the place where it\'s in.
The price is one of the most important things in moving into a new house, because I should have enough money to live there.
And where the house is matters because the landscape will matter, and the building near there will matter.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. The price is one of the most important things in moving into a new house, because I should have enough money to live there.
3. And where the house is matters because the landscape will matter, and the building near there will matter.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think it\'s the money and the place where it\'s in.
>>CORRECT!
2. The price is one of the most important things in moving into a new house, because I should have enough money to live there.
>>The price is one of the most important things to consider in moving to a new house because one should have enough money to live there.
3. And where the house is matters because the landscape will matter, and the building near there will matter.
>>Also, where the house is located should be given consideration because its landscape and neighboring buildings also matter.
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