homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 09/11
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What is your favorite holiday in your country? Why do you like it? How do you celebrate it?
my favorite holiday is christmas because I like winter and I like the speciality mood.
usually There is not celebrate just enjoy itit
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! You are doing great these days when it comes to sharing your ideas in the class. I am thankful for your patience and participation all the time. We will surely do more activities to help you construct better sentences. See you in class! ~ T. Marie
my favorite holiday is christmas because I like winter and I like the speciality mood.>> My favorite holiday is Christmas because I like winter, and I like the special mood on this day.
usually There is not celebrate just enjoy itit
usually There is not celebrate just enjoy itit
>> I don\'t usually do something to celebrate it, so I just enjoy it.
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