homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 09/12
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Are there some things that you don\'t like about holidays in your country? What is it? Why don\'t you like it?
No I don\'t have holiday that I don\'t like beacaus it is just a rest day if i want to rest I can I get freedom in the day.
There is no reason to hate
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your ideas about this matter today. You did quite well in answering the question in a direct to the point manner, which I really appreciate that. Let\'s continue to have more lessons in our class. See you there! ~ T. Marie ^^
No I don\'t have holiday that I don\'t like beacaus it is just a rest day if i want to rest I can I get freedom in the day.>> No, I don\'t have any holiday that I don\'t like beacause I can get enough rest and freedom in that day.
There is no reason to hate.
There is no reason to hate.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
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