Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Do you think people can survive without taking medicine when they get sick?
A: If people get sick, and if it goes bad, they may could not survive without medicine.
If people can get better without taking medicine, they won\'t make the medicines because their not actually necessary.
So I think taking medicine is necessary.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. If people can get better without taking medicine, they won\'t make the medicines because their not actually necessary.
3. So I think taking medicine is necessary.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. If people get sick, and if it goes bad, they may could not survive without medicine.
>>If people get sick and it gets worse, they might not survive without medicine.
2. If people can get better without taking medicine, they won\'t make the medicines because their not actually necessary.
>>If people can get better without taking medicine, then they won\'t make medicines anymore because they\'re not necessary.
3. So I think taking medicine is necessary.
>>So, I think taking medicine is necessary.
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