Homework
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Q: What feature/s do you want to be improved in computers and laptops?
A: If it\'s possible, I want to make them to be small when I want them to be.
Because people usually use their phones more than their computer because it\'s smaller, so it\'s more comfortable to use.
So I think if it can be smaller when I want, it can be more used than phones.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Because people usually use their phones more than their computer because it\'s smaller, so it\'s more comfortable to use.
3. So I think if it can be smaller when I want, it can be more used than phones.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. If it\'s possible, I want to make them to be small when I want them to be.
>>If it\'s possible, I want to make them as small as I want them to be.
2. Because people usually use their phones more than their computer because it\'s smaller, so it\'s more comfortable to use.
>>People usually use their phones more than their computers because they\'re smaller, so they\'re more comfortable to use.
3. So I think if it can be smaller when I want, it can be more used than phones.
>>So, I think if they become smaller, they can be used more than phones.
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