homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 09/14
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think about having parties in order to celebrate holidays? Do you think it\'s a good idea? Why do you think so?
Yes its good idea because party is good thing we have to do it party or not but it doesn\'t hurt to try?
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]! You did well in answering most of the questions in our homework this week. I admire your passion and continuous effort in talking about your ideas in this aspect. Let\'s continue to practice more again next week. See you then! ~ T. Maricris ^^
Yes its good idea because party is good thing we have to do it party or not but it doesn\'t hurt to try?
>> Yes, it\'s a good idea because having a party is a good thing.
>> We can have a party since it doesn\'t hurt to try, right?
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