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I only buy a key ring at the other country.
My second son bought sevenirs a lot .
But they are in the box now.
I think photos are best memorial sevenirs.
I prefer the photos with people at the pretty and hot places.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
One of the toxic characteristics of some Filipinos is asking for a souvenir after they go on a trip. I hope this kind of system will be changed in the future.
Have a happy day. remain enthusiastic!
Aki~
I only buy a key ring at the other country.
>>> I only buy a key ring in the other country.
My second son bought sevenirs a lot .
>>> My second son bought souvenirs a lot.
But they are in the box now.
>>> But they are in the box now.
I think photos are best memorial sevenirs.
>>> I think photos are the best memorial souvenirs.
I prefer the photos with people at the pretty and hot places.
>>> CORRECT!
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