homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What countries have you been to? Which is your best trip? What about the worse?
A.I went to Bali. It was too hot! And my best trip was went to Japan. It had lots of delicious food, and many fun places.
My worse trip was to first trip in Bali, because I was very sick.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ann! How are you doing this Friday? Thanks for doing your essays diligently. I hope you\'re learning from writing! See you later!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A.I went to Bali.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR> I have been to Bali.
It was too hot!
>>> CORRECT~!^^
And my best trip was went to Japan.
>>> My best trip was in Japan.
It had lots of delicious food, and many fun places.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
My worse trip was to first trip in Bali, because I was very sick.
My worse trip was to first trip in Bali, because I was very sick.
>>> My worse trip was in Bali, because I was very sick.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.