Homework
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Q: What are the bad sides of having money?
A: I think the worst thing of having money is I want more and more money if I have them.
Everyone has will to have a lot of money, and if they have or get more money than before, they will want more and more money.
But someone know how to stop craving.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Everyone has will to have a lot of money, and if they have or get more money than before, they will want more and more money.
3. But someone know how to stop craving.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Please take note of the following:
1. I think the worst thing of having money is I want more and more money if I have them.
>>I think the worst thing of having money is wanting more and more money.
2. Everyone has will to have a lot of money, and if they have or get more money than before, they will want more and more money.
>>Everyone has the will to have a lot of money, and they will do anything to get more than what they have before.
3. But someone know how to stop craving.
>>People should stop craving for money.
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