homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Pick someone/something you love. What does that person/thing look like? Why do you love him/it?
A.I love smartphone, because smartphone is very important. We can calling our parents, and checking our friends messages.
It looks like a mini square, and comfortable to bring.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ann! Happy Monday! Thanks for doing your homework. How was your weekend? Let me know later! See you!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A. I love smartphone, because smartphone is very important.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
We can calling our parents, and checking our friends messages.
>>> We can call our parents, and check our friends messages.
It looks like a mini square, and comfortable to bring.
It looks like a mini square, and comfortable to bring.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.