Homework
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Q: Which country would you like to travel in alone? Why?
A: I want to travel New Zealand alone.
I wanted to travel their for a long time, because there is a lot of different kinds of animals.
Also, I\'ve heard that there is a Hobit Village.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I want to travel New Zealand alone.
>>I want to travel to New Zealand alone.
2. I wanted to travel their for a long time, because there is a lot of different kinds of animals.
>>I wanted to travel there for a long time because there are a lot of different kinds of animals.
3. Also, I\'ve heard that there is a Hobit Village.
>>Also, I\'ve heard that there is a Hobbit Village.
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