Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t have religions.
But If someone behave badly ,They will be
punished the way of something.
They could be born by a[이름]al or have to live
in fire.
I also think most of people will disappear after dying.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Reincarnation is the rebirth of a soul in a new body. A belief of some religious groups.
As Christians, we believe that there are two destinations when a person dies, it is heaven or hell. A lot of people know this and it is their decision where they want to go in the afterlife.
Well, religion is a very broad topic. Thank you for doing your homework.
Aki~
I don’t have religions.
>>> I don’t have religion.
But If someone behave badly ,They will be punished the way of something.
>>> But If someone behaves badly, they will be punished the way of something.
They could be born by a[이름]al or have to live in fire.
>>> They could be born as a[이름]als or have to live in fire.
I also think most of people will disappear after dying.
>>> I also think most people will disappear after dying.
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