Homework
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Q: Why do you think people love to watch movies?
A: I think people love to watch movies because people can feel something that they can\'t feel in real life.
Usually in fantasy movies, there are a lot of things that are not in real life, and I think that makes movies special.
Also, sometimes they find there pasts in a movie, and that can make it special, too.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Usually in fantasy movies, there are a lot of things that are not in real life, and I think that makes movies special.
3. Also, sometimes they find there pasts in a movie, and that can make it special, too.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think people love to watch movies because people can feel something that they can\'t feel in real life.
>>I think people love to watch movies because they can feel something that they can\'t feel in real life.
2. Usually in fantasy movies, there are a lot of things that are not in real life, and I think that makes movies special.
>>CORRECT!
3. Also, sometimes they find there pasts in a movie, and that can make it special, too.
>>Also, there are times when they find their pasts in a movie, and that can make it special, too.
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