Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many kind of religion.
Our government doesn’t demand to people who have religion.and also doesn’t affect by religions.
Only people are affected it.
Especially Christians spend a [이름]day praying at the church.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
Have you heard of our first-woman president in the past? She was a devoted Catholic and during her administration, I noticed that the leader of the Catholic church was also very active during her time.
Thank you for doing your homework.
Aki~
There are many kind of religion.
>> There are many kinds of religions.
Our government doesn’t demand to people who have religion.and also doesn’t affect by religions.
>>> Our government doesn’t demand people who have religion. and also isn’t affected by religion.
Only people are affected it.
>> Only people are affected by it.
Especially Christians spend a [이름]day praying at the church
>>> CORRECT!
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