Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
Although today is my day off, I am now staying in our clinic to wait for shooting a video.
After a long time, I got a makeup and hair design, and I felt sort of awkward.
As I told you, I met Dr.Lee who is one of my friends and lives near my house.
He is a cool guy.
He has a season ticket for hotel facilities, so I went to the hotel sauna, gym, and pool with him many times.
Since I have an event to shoot this afternoon, we worked out in the morning.
He taught me how to use many machines which can improve my muscle so kindly.
I wanted to buy a lunch for him, but I couldn\'t.
That\'s because he had an appointment to set his new bed in his house at lunch time.
I heard that he bought it for more than twenty thousand dollars.
It looks so crazy, doesn\'t it?
Regarding my homework, I am not sure what you mean.
If it is about my asthetic field, I think that the lifting surgery is the hardest to learn and risky.
Right after the shooting, I will fly to my home, and drink wine with beef.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Dr, [이름]!
How was the video shoot? It has been a while since you did your last video and I wonder if it was still like a breeze or challenging for you. Knowing you, I am sure that you acted like a pro. I hope to watch this on its debut.
You were always telling me about your friend who you go to the gym with but I never realized that he is also a doctor. It is a good thing that you hang out and have activities together with the use of his membership card. Once a week is a very relaxing time to go to the sauna and just feel the heat of the steam.
I guess he also has a very successful clinic just like you. Sleeping on a $20,000 bed can probably give him sweet dreams and improve the quality of his sleep. ^^ Well, a new bed is worth a comfortable rest.
The homework question has something to do with the next topic from our book \"Skills and Talent\". You got the point of the question and you stated your answer correctly.
Then, read and understand the grammar suggestions below. You used very new expressions efficiently today, well done! Overall, excellent execution for this homework!
By now, you are enjoying the sumptuous wine and tender beef. Cheers!
See you tomorrow!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Although today is my day off, I am now staying in our clinic to wait for shooting a video.
>> Correct!
After a long time, I got a makeup and hair design, and I felt sort of awkward.
After a long time, I got a makeup and hair design, and I felt sort of awkward.
>> Correct! Good expressions!
As I told you, I met Dr.Lee who is one of my friends and lives near my house.
>> Correct!
He is a cool guy.
He is a cool guy.
>> Correct!
He has a season ticket for hotel facilities, so I went to the hotel sauna, gym, and pool with him many times.
>> Correct!
Since I have an event to shoot this afternoon, we worked out in the morning.
>> Correct!
He taught me how to use many machines which can improve my muscle so kindly.
>> Correct!
I wanted to buy a lunch for him, but I couldn\'t.
>> I wanted to buy lunch for him, but I couldn\'t.
That\'s because he had an appointment to set his new bed in his house at lunch time.
>> Correct!
I heard that he bought it for more than twenty thousand dollars.
>> Correct!
It looks so crazy, doesn\'t it?
>> Correct!
Regarding my homework, I am not sure what you mean.
Regarding my homework, I am not sure what you mean.
>> Correct!
If it is about my asthetic field, I think that the lifting surgery is the hardest to learn and risky.
If it is about my asthetic field, I think that the lifting surgery is the hardest to learn and risky.
>> Correct!
Or: aesthetic
Right after the shooting, I will fly to my home, and drink wine with beef.
Right after the shooting, I will fly to my home, and drink wine with beef.
>> Correct!
See you.
See you.
>> Correct!
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