homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you want to spend your time with your family?
I want to spend time with my family for exercise
My family likes hiking so I want to that
It make my family more solidarity and friendly
강사 첨삭
You have a healthy plan and I like that, [이름]. It is rare to see families exercising together, so may you carry out your plan. -Faith-
How do you want to spend your time with your family?
>> CORRECT
I want to spend time with my family for exercise
I want to spend time with my family for exercise
>> I want to spend time with my family for exercise.
My family likes hiking so I want to that
My family likes hiking so I want to that
>> In fact, my family likes hiking, so I want to do that, too.
It make my family more solidarity and friendly
It make my family more solidarity and friendly
>> It makes my family to have more solidarity and friendliness.
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