HOMEWORK
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HOMEWORK FOR 09.20.2023
WRITING TASK: What important information should we need to mention during the first meeting?
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I think important information is name, age, where live, hobby and major or job.
They\'re good topics to talk to people, especially person who first meet
강사 첨삭
Exactly, they are important especially if it is a formal meeting, Melody. Thank you for your straightforward answer. -Faith-
WRITING TASK: What important information should we need to mention during the first meeting?>> CORRECT
I think important information is name, age, where live, hobby and major or job.
>> I think the important information to mention are name, age, address, hobby, and major or job.
They\'re good topics to talk to people, especially person who first meet
They\'re good topics to talk to people, especially person who first meet
>> They are good topics to talk to people, especially during the first meeting.
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