HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR 09.22.2023
WRITING TASK: Would you prefer living in the bustling city of Seoul or in any relaxing countryside of Korea? Explain your answer.
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I prefer living in the bustling city of Seoul.
Because there are so many convenient store. Also nightlife of Seoul is so fun.
But sometimes I want to relax in countryside of Korea to feel silent.
강사 첨삭
I am glad to know that you have several reasons to enjoy your city life, Melody. Always take care of yourself!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: Would you prefer living in the bustling city of Seoul or in any relaxing countryside of Korea? Explain your answer.>> CORRECT
I prefer living in the bustling city of Seoul. Because there are so many convenient store.
>> I prefer living in the bustling city of Seoul because there are so many convenient stores here.
Also nightlife of Seoul is so fun.
Also nightlife of Seoul is so fun.
>> Also, the nightlife of Seoul is so fun.
But sometimes I want to relax in countryside of Korea to feel silent.
But sometimes I want to relax in countryside of Korea to feel silent.
>> However, sometimes I want to relax in the countryside of Korea to feel silent.
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