Homework
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Q: Why are some cartoons not appropriate for small kids?
A: I think it\'s because some of them have some scenes that are not appropriate for kids.
If there are some of scenes that are not appropriate for kids, like scenes that are cruel, kids can be shocked.
Also, for very small kids, they can believe that cartoons are real.
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2. If there are some of scenes that are not appropriate for kids, like scenes that are cruel, kids can be shocked.
3. Also, for very small kids, they can believe that cartoons are real.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think it\'s because some of them have some scenes that are not appropriate for kids.
>>I think it\'s because some of them have scenes that are not appropriate for kids.
2. If there are some of scenes that are not appropriate for kids, like scenes that are cruel, kids can be shocked.
>>If there are some scenes that are not appropriate for kids, like scenes that are cruel, they might be shocked.
3. Also, for very small kids, they can believe that cartoons are real.
>>Also, for very small kids, they easily believe that cartoons are real.
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