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WRITING TASK: What are the best places in Korea?
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The best places in Korea is Olympic Park.
Olympic Park is very huge.
There are many concert halls, restaurants and sport facilities.
Many people always walk or run or ride a bike or play sports.
It also includes lake, cultural site, photo spot, etc.
If you go to the Olympic Park, you can feel fresh.
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Wow! Thank you for your prompt answer, Melody! This place excites me. See you!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What are the best places in Korea?>> CORRECT
The best places in Korea is Olympic Park.
>> The best place in Korea is Olympic Park.
Olympic Park is very huge.
Olympic Park is very huge.
>> Olympic Park is huge.
There are many concert halls, restaurants and sport facilities.
There are many concert halls, restaurants and sport facilities.
>> There are many concert halls, restaurants. and sport facilities there.
Many people always walk or run or ride a bike or play sports.
Many people always walk or run or ride a bike or play sports.
>> Many people walk, run, ride a bike or play sports there.
It also includes lake, cultural site, photo spot, etc.
It also includes lake, cultural site, photo spot, etc.
>> It also has a lake, cultural site, and photo spot.
If you go to the Olympic Park, you can feel fresh.
If you go to the Olympic Park, you can feel fresh.
>> If you go to Olympic Park, you can feel fresh.
OR You will love how refreshed you feel after visiting Olympic Park.
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