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I believe that parents should play a role in watching their children plan their future and supporting them with support and encouragement. I believe that children should learn and experience many things, dream what they want, and go through the process of having their dreams change, but my husband has a difference of opinion on this question. My husband believes that we need to provide some direction for our children\'s future. For example, he will help you with a promising career, so he advises you to find something that suits you and study.
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Elaina,
I see, you and your husband have different views on this. I guess there is an influence on what had happened in the past. That is where your husband is taking his thoughts from.
Have a great day!
Aki~
I believe that parents should play a role in watching their children plan their future and supporting them with support and encouragement.
>> CORRECT!
I believe that children should learn and experience many things, dream what they want, and go through the process of having their dreams change, but my husband has a difference of opinion on this question.
>>> I believe that children should learn and experience many things, dream what they want, and go through the process of having their dreams change, but my husband has a different opinion on this question.
My husband believes that we need to provide some direction for our children\'s future. For example, he will help you with a promising career, so he advises you to find something that suits you and study.
>> CORRECT!
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