Homework
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Q: What is the most important feature of your phone and why do you think it is so?
A: I think the most important feature of my phone is it has the password.
I think it\'s the most important feature because if there\'s no password, it can\'t be protected or my privacy can\'t be protected from others.
And I think other features are also important, too.
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2. I think it\'s the most important feature because if there\'s no password, it can\'t be protected or my privacy can\'t be protected from others.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the most important feature of my phone is it has the password.
>> I think the most important feature of my phone is its password.
2. I think it\'s the most important feature because if there\'s no password, it can\'t be protected or my privacy can\'t be protected from others.
>>I think it\'s the most important feature because if my phone has no password, it won\'t be protected from those who want to access it without my permission.
3. And I think other features are also important, too.
>>Also, I think other features are also important, too.
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