Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually buy comfortable and useful clothes or shoes.
Because they can wear often.
Many people interested in designers bag in Korea.
We can easily see it everywhere.
I think people have to buy it whthin their ability.
I am trying not to buy high-priced bag.
But It is not easy to be away from its temptation.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
These days, a lot of people are getting interested in mi[이름]alism. I think this is one way of helping mother Earth. The majority of our trash is coming from textile and food waste. Let\'s be part of saving the Earth :) keep trying!
Aki~
I usually buy comfortable and useful clothes or shoes.
>>> CORRECT!
Because they can wear often.
>>> Because they can be wearable often
>>> Because you can wear them often.
Many people interested in designers bag in Korea.
>>> Many people are interested in designer bags in Korea.
We can easily see it everywhere.
>>> CORRECT!
I think people have to buy it within their ability.
>>> CORRECT!
I am trying not to buy high-priced bags.
>>> CORRECT!
But It is not easy to be away from its temptation.
>>> CORRECT!
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