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My short-term goal is to get my strength back.
After taking a break for about 8 months, I started taking Zumba classes again.
It was difficult, so I was taking 2 out of 3 classes a day, but I am planning to take 3 classes again to build up my energy.
And my long-term goal is to continue learning hip-hop dance to create better movements in Zumba classes, and to plan to teach other classes besides Zumba.
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Great job Eliana!
Thank you for expressing your thoughts in detail. I hope that you will be able to fulfill these goals.
Have a great day!
Aki~
My short-term goal is to get my strength back.
>>> CORRECT
After taking a break for about 8 months, I started taking Zumba classes again.
>>> CORRECT
It was difficult, so I was taking 2 out of 3 classes a day, but I am planning to take 3 classes again to build up my energy.
>>> CORRECT
And my long-term goal is to continue learning hip-hop dance to create better movements in Zumba classes and to plan to teach other classes besides Zumba
>>> My long-term goal is to continue learning hip-hop dance to create better movements in Zumba classes and to plan to teach other classes besides Zumba.
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