Homework
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Q: What makes dinosaurs fascinating?
A: I think for the main, their size makes them fascinating.
Usually, when people think of reptiles, they usually think of small lizards, but dinosaurs are very huge reptiles.
And I think their appearance makes them fascinating, too.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Usually, when people think of reptiles, they usually think of small lizards, but dinosaurs are very huge reptiles.
3. And I think their appearance makes them fascinating, too.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think for the main, their size makes them fascinating.
>>I think the main thing that makes them fascinating is their size.
2. Usually, when people think of reptiles, they usually think of small lizards, but dinosaurs are very huge reptiles.
>>Usually, when people think of reptiles, they think of small lizards, but dinosaurs are reptiles, too. And they are very large reptiles.
3. And I think their appearance makes them fascinating, too.
>>I think their appearance makes them fascinating, too.
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