homework
학생이 쓴 원문
“The advantages of traveling while you\'re still young”
I can learn many things if I travel when I am still young.
If I use those things that I learned, I will get good results on my work. I can also understand the cultures of other countries.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.Nikki ^^
NOTE: I re-arranged your paragraph to make it more logical :)
I can learn many things if I travel when I am still young.
>> I can learn more things if I travel more while I am still young.
I can also understand the cultures of other countries.
>> CORRECT!
If I use those things that I learned, I will get good results on my work.
>> If I am able to apply all my learnings from traveling, it will give good results to my work in the future.
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