Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “Is it important to plan for the future? why or why not?”
I think it’s important but I don’t think the plan should be concrete.
It is because I can change my mind.
So, I like just thinking of my future life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework!
I really appreciate it!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ^^
-T.Nikki ^^
I think it’s important but I don’t think the plan should be concrete.
>> I think it’s important but I don’t think the plan should be concrete as early as now.
It is because I can change my mind.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is because I know that I can still change a lot of decisions in my life.
So, I like just thinking of my future life.
>> So, I prefer just thinking about it without deciding finally.
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