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WRITING TASK: How high is the highest building in your country? Can you please describe it?
The highest building in Korea is Lotte World Tower.
It is 555meters. It has 123 floors.
Lotte World Tower is 5th highest building in the world.
I can see it at my office and home.
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You did a good job providing important information about the building, Melody. I appreciate your quick answer.-Faith-
WRITING TASK: How high is the highest building in your country? Can you please describe it?>> CORRECT
The highest building in Korea is Lotte World Tower.
>> CORRECT
It is 555meters. It has 123 floors.
>> It is 555meters, and it has 123 floors.
Lotte World Tower is 5th highest building in the world.
Lotte World Tower is the fifth highest building in the world.
I can see it at my office and home.
>> I can see it from my office and home.
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