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WRITING TASK: What is a perfect vacation for you in New Zealand?
Perfect vacation in New Zealand is resting.
wake up late, swim in the sea, eat delicious food, walk a road with listening to music, etc...
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Nice work, Melody! You made me imagine all these activities. Your writing is clear and I like it!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What is a perfect vacation for you in New Zealand?>> CORRECT
Perfect vacation in New Zealand is resting.
>> A perfect vacation in New Zealand is resting.
wake up late, swim in the sea, eat delicious food, walk a road with listening to music, etc...
>> I would like to wake up late, swim in the sea, eat delicious food, and walk around while listening to music.
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