Homework
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Q: What kind of musical instrument do you want to learn and why?
A: If I can, I want to be an expert in playing piano.
It\'s because when I see of some other students who are really good at playing piano, they look so cool, so I want to be like them.
Also, I think guitar is another instrument I\'d like to learn.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because when I see of some other students who are really good at playing piano, they look so cool, so I want to be like them.
3. Also, I think guitar is another instrument I\'d like to learn.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. If I can, I want to be an expert in playing piano.
>>If given the chance, I want to be an expert in playing the piano.
2. It\'s because when I see of some other students who are really good at playing piano, they look so cool, so I want to be like them.
>>When I see other students who are really good at playing the piano, they look so cool, so I want to be like them.
3. Also, I think guitar is another instrument I\'d like to learn.
>>CORRECT!
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