Homework
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Q: What are the benefits of eating eggs?
A: I think the best benefits of eating eggs is I can get a lot of nutrition from them.
I also like to eat them because they taste good, and also the texture is also nice, and there are a lot of nutrition too.
I think most foods including eggs taste good.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I also like to eat them because they taste good, and also the texture is also nice, and there are a lot of nutrition too.
3. I think most foods including eggs taste good.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the best benefits of eating eggs is I can get a lot of nutrition from them.
>>I think the best benefit of eating eggs is I can get a lot of nutrition from them.
2. I also like to eat them because they taste good, and also the texture is also nice, and there are a lot of nutrition too.
>>I also like to eat them because they taste good, the texture is nice, and there are a lot of nutrients in them, too.
3. I think most foods including eggs taste good.
>>CORRECT!
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