homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Dear!Thank you for doing your homework! It\'s good that you don\'t gain weight even if you eat a lot! Just like your friends, I actually envy you because I am so podong podong! KKK Your metabolism is fast. See you later too!
Teacher Karen
Here are your corrections:
Good morning, Karen~~
>>Correct!
how was your weekend?
>>Correct!
>>Capital letter: How
I was out of town for the weekend with my friends.
>>Correct!
Even they drank too much i enjoyed too much.
>>They drank too much alcohol but I enjoyed their company.
For the homework, actually I\'m really greatful of my body.
>>For the homework; actually,I\'m really greatful gfor my body.
because even I eat too much, I don\'t gain weight easily.
>>Because even if I eat too much, I don\'t gain weight easily.
I resemble my father\'s physical constitution, who also never gets fat.
>>Correct!
whatever time is too late to eat, I don\'t care about it.
>>I eat anytime I want and don\'t care about it.
If I want to eat, just eat until I feel full.
>>If I want to eat I just eat until I become full.
almost my friends are envious of me who tell that you are the happiest person in the world. hahaha~~
>>Almost all of my friends are envious of me. They say that I am the happiest person in the world. Hahaha.
I think I have been boast of myself too much. sorry for that. (:
>>I think I boast too much. I\'m soory for that.
Have a nice day and see you later by phone.
>>Have a nice day and talk to you later!
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