Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t want to live in china.
Chinese food is too oilly and their personality
is strong to live together.
Especially I don’t care what country I want to live .
I prefer warm country to cold country.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Thank you for this. I would like you to understand the usage of \"Especially\", you use that for a particular reason that is related to what you mentioned earlier. For example, if you were talking about China, then you would say, I especially don\'t like their personality.
See you in class.
Aki~
I don’t want to live in China.
>>> CORRECT!
or >>> I do not wish to live in China.
Chinese food is too oilly and their personality is strong to live together.
>>> Chinese food is too oily and their personality is strong enough to live together.
Especially I don’t care what country I want to live .
>>> I don\'t really care what country I want to live in.
I prefer warm country to cold country.
>>> I prefer a warm country to a cold country.
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