homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.Why do you think many people want to live abroad?
A.Because when we are younger,we should live with our parents. So when we older, maybe we think our country is so bored.
It\'s why many people want to live abroad.( maybe? It\'s my thought! )
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A.Because when we are younger,we should live with our parents.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
So when we older, maybe we think our country is so bored.
>>> So when we get older, maybe we may think that our country is so boring.
It\'s why many people want to live abroad.
It\'s why many people want to live abroad.
>>> It\'s the reason why many people want to live abroad.
( Maybe? It\'s my thought! )
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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