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2023-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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What are the possible reasons people give up learning a language? I think there ara many reasons give up learning a language. learning a language is very difficult because we have to think differently with now. Also we memorize a lot of words. I think it is not easy. And leaning language require we spent a lot of time. we need patience.

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I agree with all the reasons you stated, [이름]. I hope these won\'t get in a way of improving your English skills.-Faith-
What are the possible reasons people give up learning a language?
>> CORRECT
I think there ara many reasons give up learning a language.
>> I think there are many reasons people give up learning a language.
learning a language is very difficult because we have to think differently with now.
>> Learning a language is very difficult because we have to think differently now.
Also we memorize a lot of words. I think it is not easy.
>> Also, we memorize a lot of words, and it is not easy.
And leaning language require we spent a lot of time. 
>> In addition, learning a language requires a lot of time. 
we need patience.
>> We need patience.

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